His Wife, My Toy: A First Time Cuckold Novella Kindle Edition

One could make the argument that this author suffers from instant gratification. Her fantasy is certainly legitimate but the segways to reality sounds to me to be a hypotenuse, the shortest distance between two points. Igniting the short fuse to self destruction the lustful, maybe powerful surge of erotic emotions is never experienced. People are not this mechanical. Why, because mechanical is as boring as vanilla just quicker to find an early death.Character development, teasing, denial and desire need chapters all unto themselves before this reader wants to touch the third rail. This story only passes the smell test in that it stinks. The author even changed Jessica's name to Tiffany and then back making me think her name really didn't matter. What did matter was Jessica went down like a flat tire, suggesting Triple AAA, might be more useful than reading about the accident this story developed into.The good thing about this story is that it is short.I felt that cuckold Tim should of just asked me if I wanted fries with his wifes pussy on page one.No thanks on both accounts.